Today I’ve decided to participate in First Chapter First Paragraph, hosted by Diane, at Bibliophile by the Sea.
I’ll also be spotlighting this one in Teaser Tuesdays, at Should Be Reading.
The rules are simple: excerpt the opening paragraph or two, along with the book title and author.
Or grab an excerpt from somewhere in the book.
I’m going out on a limb and sharing the opening of my novel Web of Tyranny, available on Amazon. (Kindle version – also available in paperback).
For the first few seconds of every day, before reality hit, she felt her body floating in a cloudy tangle as she came up from her dreams. Beautiful dreams of sunny days filled with music, ice cream and lots of laughter. She could still remember a time when her days had been like that; she’d been much younger then, granted the indulgences of early childhood. Those moments usually happened in the warm, cozy rooms at Grandma’s house, when she’d had a feeling that everything would work out somehow.
But she was not at Grandma’s today, and as she tossed aside the heavy tangle of sheets and blankets, she knew she wouldn’t be going to Grandma’s again any time soon. Father had other plans for her. Her summer days would be full of farm chores, beginning in the early hours of the day and ending only when the last box of fruit had been emptied and the last peach had been cut and placed on the trays. In the shed, with its overhang that shielded from the hot summer sun, the smell of ripening fruit made her gag, but she had to stifle the urge. Otherwise, she could end up with a far worse punishment than cutting fruit all day.
Margaret shuddered as she recalled some of those punishments.
The story chronicles the life of Margaret Graham, from age ten to adulthood.
Book Description: In equal parts funny and serious, Web of Tyranny by Laurel-Rain Snow is a proud, if poignant tale of Margaret Elaine Graham, a woman entangled in the trenches that epitomized her abusive childhood home only to flee into a stultifying marriage with Bob Williams. Seduced by the hope of achieving her goal of a college education and a life free from domination, she is blinded to Bob’s true qualities—and in a very real sense jumps from the pan into the fire. Oppression begets oppression and as Meg walks a thin line of human betrayal, she learns to stake her own claim to happiness—no matter how high the cost. Her fight leads to politicking during the radical antiwar movement of the 60s and 70s, which manifests as a near-compulsion, which will turn her world on end. Enticed by the possibilities open to her and chafing at the strictures of the marital ties, Meg bolts from the marriage with her toddler son in tow where a whole myriad of troubles await her.
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Now I’m going to hop on over to Diane’s and Miz B’s blogs and find out what the rest of you are spotlighting.
Great post 🙂 Following now!
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Thanks for stopping by, Jennifer, and for following. Enjoy your week!
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Sounds good, great teaser and I love the cover as well
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Thanks, Kate, glad you liked it…and the cover. Have a great week, and thanks for stopping by.
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Wow, I’m impressed! Great job with the opening of your book! I love the little cliffhanger you left us with. And, at the risk of sounding like I’m gushing, lol, I think you have a great cover, also. 🙂
Happy Tuesday. Here’s my teaser: http://www.romanticlovebooks.com/home/2012/2/21/teaser-tuesdays-the-shop-on-blossom-street.html
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Gushing is definitely allowed, Kristyn…lol
Glad you liked the opener and the cover. It’s one of my favorites.
Thanks for stopping by, and enjoy your week.
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Wowza, sounds intense!
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Yes, it is definitely intense. It reflects many years of working with abused children. Thanks for stopping by, Autumn Review, and enjoy your week.
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I will have to go look for your book.
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Thanks for visiting, Jo…hope you have a great reading week.
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Ooh, this sounds good. And I love the cover! 🙂
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Thanks, Karen…I like the way they depicted this one, too. Glad you could visit today, and have a great week.
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Poor girl…living on memories:(
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Yes, she does seem entangled in them. Thanks for stopping by, Melissa, and enjoy your week.
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Great intro into the book, it sounds very intense.
Here’s my TT Post: http://tinyurl.com/6sqqgac
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Thanks, Maria…glad you could stop in and check it out. Intense is a good description.
Enjoy your week….
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Cool teaser! Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my blog!
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You’re welcome, Andrea, and I’m glad you could stop by, too. Enjoy your week!
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I feel sorry for her already, in the first few paragraphs, and I imagine I would feel for her through the entire book! The title is very apt, based on your comments.
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Thanks, Harvee…glad you could stop by and view my snippet. Hope you have a great week.
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WOW Laurel, Your intro draws me in bigtime! Sounds like a compelling, and powerful story.
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Thanks, Diane…glad you liked it. It’s a story all-too familiar to me, and it’s an unfortunately recurring nightmare for some kids.
Glad you could stop by…and have a great week.
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That is a fantastic beginning. Your writing has a lovely flow. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks, Christine…glad you think so. Thanks for visiting today….and have a great week.
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This sounds like a compelling story. Thank you for posting an excerpt from the book. Thanks, too, for your comment about my teaser.
Sandy’s Teaser
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Thanks for visiting, Sandy…glad you liked the teaser. Enjoy your week!
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Wonderful intro. It brought images of loving being at Grandma’s house!
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Oh, me too, Nise. I always loved hanging out at my grandmother’s house. Therefore, she often shows up as a character in my books (fictionalized, of course).
Thanks for stopping by, and enjoy your week.
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What a wonderful opening! I’m definitely teased. Thanks so much for giving us a taste.
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I’m happy to do it, Joy. I am glad you could stop by; enjoy your week!
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OOOh nice! What an intense tease!
Thanks for visiting my blog!
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Thanks, Jessica…glad you could stop by. Enjoy your week!
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WOW. That cover just screams mystery! great teaser! thanksf or stopping by. 🙂
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Yes, I think it’s kind of spooky…lol; but I am pleased with it.
Thanks for stopping by, kah_cherub; glad you like it. Have a great week.
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LOVE IT!! I’ll have to add this to my WL!!
Here’s Mine
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Thanks for visiting, Vicki…glad you liked the teaser. Have a great week!
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Thank you so much for posting this! Sounds great! And thank you for stopping by my blog!
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Glad you like it, Amie, and thanks for stopping by. Hope you have a great week.
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Fantastic teaser, you definitely caught my interest as well. Thanks for sharing about your book!
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Thanks, Janet Ruth…I don’t often do it, but today it felt right. Glad you could stop by, and have a great week.
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Good teaser/opening paragraphs. Thanks for visiting!
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Thanks, Heather…glad you could stop by and take a peek at my opener. Have a great week.
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That’s a very nice opening, Laurel. She sounds resigned.
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Yes, she does, doesn’t she? Thanks for visiting, Shelley, and enjoy your week.
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This sounds pretty cool! The first sentence really hooks you! That’s my favorite part about books:)
Thanks for sharing!
Stephanie @Steph’s Book Corner
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I’m glad you liked it, Stephanie, and thanks for stopping by. I love book openers, too. Have a great weekend!
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Very cool teaser.. thanks for sharing.
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Thanks, T. F., glad you liked it. And I’m glad you could stop by. Enjoy your weekend.
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