Today I’ll be participating again in First Chapter First Paragraph, hosted by Diane, at Bibliophile by the Sea.
I’ll also be spotlighting this one in Teaser Tuesdays, at Should Be Reading
My excerpt is from Unbroken, by Jamie Lisa Forbes.
First Paragraphs/Teaser:
Gwen Swan stomped her feet on the porch mat. In the gray light, she fretted over the five eggs in her pail, ignoring the icy draft ruffling the dogs. Damnit—now she’d have to buy eggs in town. The door scraped the floor planks as she pushed it shut and the dogs hunkered back down on their beds with soft groans.
Inside, Will, still in his long underwear, drank coffee by the stove. “How cold is it?” he asked.
“Cold enough to stop the hens from laying. You’d better get your pants on. Your father’ll be here any minute.”
Will moved away, slurping his coffee.
Eggs and sausages sizzled in the skillet by the time John’s truck rumbled into the yard. In the pause that followed, she dreaded his every approaching step.
Sure enough, the door flew open and his voice boomed across the kitchen. “Coffee hot?”
The same damn phrase every morning—as if he’d ever gotten it cold! She’d fed him three meals a day since her mother-in-law had died—barely two months after she’d married Will. Oh, she was so hopeful in those days, so eager to show her new family how much she could do! But after ten years of meals, with a handful of days off for childbirth, John’s voice at the crack of dawn zapped her like a cattle prod and just like a cow, she wanted to knock him down as she charged out the door.
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Blurb: Ranching is a life of extremes, perhaps even more so on the high plains near Laramie, Wyoming. And no one knows that better than Gwen Swan, who married both her husband Will and his family ranch where she works hard beside the men and struggles to raise her two children. Meg Braeburn, who has broken away from her family’s ranch, expects unrelenting hard work when she takes a job on the place neighboring the Swans’. She and her son face an uncertain future, but she is determined to leave the past behind and make a good life for them. Gwen, who understands the corrosive effects of isolation better than Meg, includes Meg in her family and community and wins Meg’s gratitude and support. But there is little time for reflection on anyone’s part as the wheel of the seasons grinds relentlessly onward bringing disasters and triumphs and a a rough road for all concerned. The prodigal Swan son returns and relationships shift, old resentments resurface and friendships are strained and tested as everyone finds themselves struggling against the elements and each other to continue their way of life. In this remarkable debut novel the author presents us with fully formed characters that ring as clear and true as the picture of ranch life she paints as a background for the universal struggles we all confront.
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I like how these opening lines show us the dynamics in the relationships between the characters Gwen, Will, and John. From Gwen’s perspective, I can feel hopelessness, helplessness, and frustration. There is an underlying anger that creates tension between them all. I can’t wait to read more!
Doesn’t sound as though she is much appreciated, and is often taken for granted.
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Yes, I already feel sorry for her…I’m wondering what she might do to ease these feelings? Thanks for stopping by, Heather, and have a great week.
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I’d like to read this one. Sounds like a classic pioneer-style story with lots of work with just a little monetary reward.
My first paragraph is here this week: Quirky Girls Read
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I agree, Margot…and since I grew up on a farm, I can totally relate. And I was happy to escape to the city! lol
Thanks for stopping by, and enjoy your read.
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Sounds like a sad life for her 😦 Thank you for stopping by my teaser 🙂
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I think so, too, Jessica. I watched my mother (I grew up on a farm) going through similar things.
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This one sounds like a good one 😀
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I think I’m going to relate to it, Tabby. Thanks for stopping by, and enjoy your reads.
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Sounds intriguing — thanks for stopping by my place. http://eyesandearsblog.blogspot.com/
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Thanks, Alan….I enjoyed visiting your blog, too. Hope you have a great week.
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Sounds really good althoughI haven’t heard of this book before I should take a look.
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I hadn’t either until I was contacted to participate in a blog tour. I read the synopsis and thought it sounded like a good one.
Thanks for stopping by, Kate, and enjoy your week.
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That’s a wonderful opening and teaser. But it sure makes me glad I live in the city!
Thanks for the visit, and happy reading this week!
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Oh, me too, Joy. I grew up on a farm, much like the one described here…even the characters seem familiar! I couldn’t wait to flee to the city…lol
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Oh wow, this sounds depressing. I hope your heroine can break through this!
Thanks for stepping by my blog and sharing you teaser. If you are interested in more memes, maybe you can check out this page and see if you like something.
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Thanks for visiting, Caro….I think the character might just reach the point where she must do something desperate. Can’t wait to find out!
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Thanks so much for stopping by my blog. Great teaser!
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Thanks, Sara…glad you could visit today. Enjoy your week!
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Oh yes! I want to read this one.
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Doesn’t it sound good? Thanks for stopping by, Nise, and enjoy your read.
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Sounds intriguing – I love that cover.
here is our teaser!
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Oh, so do I, Pixie. Thanks for visiting…and enjoy your week.
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You’re right – you sure do learn a lot about the dynamics of the relationship in that passage. I’d keep reading!
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Thanks, JoAnn…I love catching a glimpse of the characters and their relationships in the opening lines. Glad you could stop by! Enjoy your week.
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After reading the excerpt you posted, I went right to Amazon and downloaded Unbroken to my Kindle. Can’t wait to read it.
Here’s my teaser: Sandy’s Teaser
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Good for you, Sandy. I love when that happens. Believe me, I have done the same thing after reading teasers…lol
Glad you could stop by, and enjoy the read.
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Thanks for the interesting teaser!
Thanks for sharing ABD for stopping by my blog!
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Thanks for returning the visit, Bookish Babes…have a great week!
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What a gripping teaser! My teaser comes from Bath Tangle by Georgette Heyer.
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I thought so, too, Beth…Thanks for stopping by, and enjoy your week.
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Interesting teaser. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my blog. 🙂
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Thanks, Christine…glad you could stop by, and I hope you enjoy your week.
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I really like that one, I feel the anxiety and tension that she must feel too!
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Oh, me too, Crystal….thanks for stopping by, and enjoy your week.
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Sad tease!! Very descriptive though!
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Yes, I’m very eager to see how the character turns things around. Thanks for stopping by, Jessica. Enjoy your week.
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A different kind of tease. I like it although it’s kind of sad…
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Sana @ artsy musings of a bibliophile
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Yes, I think so, too, Sana. Thanks for stopping by, and enjoy your read.
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Awesome Teaser!
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Thanks, Intriguing Reads…glad you liked it. Thanks for visiting….
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